In this first-person point of view argumentive essay, Shawn Mullin the author uses the basic task for writing arguments in order to get his point across about his stressful life in college at the time. He first explain the issues that he having clearly in the begining of his writing to let the reader know his point of view on each. Shawn also did a great job in his essay of gathering information and providing the facts and situation about each of the problems that he is facing. He then uses these facts to provide different solutions to each of his problems, making a claim on how each would work out how each would work if he chose that option concerning that specific issue. He uses the information he knows to support his claims explaining in detail on why which one would work. When thinking about writing his parents for extra money to help him out, he comes to the claim that, ” At this point, I wouldn’t object, but i know I’ll never make that call. No, I already have a job; what i need is more hours”.(42) The orginization of each individual argument ties into the story beautifully expalining the main argument or situation he is facing at the time. He does this very effectively and makes it easy for the reader to follow. He at the end uses his arguments to come about with the best possible solution to his problems. He used his own voice and opinion to make his argument relevant and understandable from different points of view.